Be to her, Persephone,
All the things I might not be;
Take her head upon your knee.
She that was so proud and wild,
Flippant, arrogant and free,
She that had no need of me,
Is a little lonely child
Lost in Hell, -- Persephone,
Take her head upon your knee;
Say to her, "My dear, my dear,
It is not so dreadful here." - Edna St Vincent Millay
Monday 19 January 2009
The Beloved Passer-by
My father vanished from my life sometime during the year I was twelve. He had pulled the vanishing act a number of times before, so it was difficult to tell that he had really gone for good. When I was eight, he ran off to Boston with another woman, but he still sent Christmas gifts, so I assumed he was off on one of his lengthy business trips. He reconciled with my mother and rejoined the family when I was ten. My maternal grandfather had died a few weeks before, leaving a small legacy which my mother gave to my father to invest in a kitchen-designing business which promptly failed. At age eleven, I was now old enough to realize that my parents weren't happy and to know that the odor on his breath in the morning was alcohol. We spent that summer basically waiting for him to leave. He left in the autumn, the creditors closed in, and my mother, on legal advice, took out an ad saying she was not responsible for her husband's debts. He phoned a few times during the following year, usually in the small hours of the morning, asking to speak to me. Finally, in exasperation, my mother told him to not phone at all if he couldn't do so at a decent hour. The calls stopped.
A little over a year after he left, Judy Collins appeared on a variety show singing this song: Luckily, I was alone in the house. I was ambushed by a storm of weeping, and said, for the last time: "Daddy."
My mother took out Canadian citizenship under her maiden name when I was sixteen. It was then that I learned that my father had been a father of three when he met her. My eldest half-sister was five when he left; her brother was three and her baby sister less than a year. My mother told me that they had been unable to marry because of his first marriage, "...but I felt married." I wandered around, saying to myself, "I'm a bastard, I'm a bastard..." not in shame, but in awe, and a good helping of teen-aged melodrama.
During my first trip to England when I was nineteen, we stayed in the same house in Muswell Hill where my parents had often visited in the year before their emigration to Canada. One night, I had a vivid dream about my father and awoke in tears, convinced that he had died. Well, he was an alcoholic and a smoker, and had had more than his share of life-threatening accidents due to the former, so it seemed feasible.
In my mid-twenties, I was awakened at three o'clock in the morning by a long-distance phone-call. The operator asked me to wait, but there was nobody there.
Not long after, I embarked on a Master's degree in Education, emphasis on creative arts in learning. During my studies, I came across a poem by Marie-Claire Blais entitled "L'ami": . . . Et quand venait Avril, l'homme rentrait chez nous, C'était souvent à la fin d'une fraîche journée . . . .
Ce n'est qu'un passant bien-aimé, disait nos méres Mais cet homme venait chez nous, il baisait notre front A la dérobée Et s'éloignait aussitôt pendant que sommeillant doucement Nos visions...
(. . . And when April came, the man would come into our place It was often at the end of a cool day . . . .
It is nothing more than a beloved passer-by, said our mothers But this man would come to our place, he would brush his lips furtively across our foreheads And would leave as soon as dreams sweetened our sleep...)
This poem so reminded me of my father, who even when he lived with us, seemed to have banished himself to the outskirts of our lives, and I responded with a blank verse poem in pentameter, ending with an Alexandrine. (I was experimenting with poetic forms at the time, and forgive me in advance, I'm no Marie-Claire Blais):
Message to the Friend After Reading Marie-Clair Blais When you left for the first time, I saw you Sitting on the porch as we drove away I wept without knowing why. Packages Would arrive by post and every time We took a trip, I unwittingly broke My mother's heart by watching for you at Each corner and station, for it had seemed Your habit to appear without warning with gifts.
When you came back, I ran into your arms And you swung me up, stepping into the Dark kitchen and knocking over the milk Bottles. That's how it always seemed to be, Beloved passer-by, we reached toward Each other with the joy and eagerness Of long absence, tinged with awkwardness Of strangeness. You knew me so well and so little.
When you left for the last time, you kissed me Clumsily, slipping two chocolate bars and Two magazines under my pillow. I Crouched in my bed, not daring, not bearing To see your car drive into the dawn. In The dark, I choked back the chocolate like Bitter pills. Later, I blacked out each line In my diary meticulously.
Did you mean to wake me? I think you were A bit of a glutton for pathos with No appetite for pain. I think that I'm my Father's daughter. I'd like you to know that I knew that you loved me, never doubted You loved me, but that each fresh failure, each Perceived rejection when you attempted Reconnection sapped your courage. It's quite All right, I have a piece of you in safekeeping.
A few years ago, when I took up researching my family history in earnest, I realized I could track down my half-siblings. I sent Christmas cards to my half-brother and a first cousin, saying who I was and emphasizing that I didn't expect a reply. Considering I'd just dropped the psychological equivalent of a bomb on Colchester, they took my overtures graciously. Very graciously. It turned out my father had wived it wealthily in California not much more than a year after I had last seen him driving away. He had a condo with a boat mooring on San Francisco Bay. He had been awarded a MBE for fundraising, for heaven's sake, pretty rich, considering the financial circumstances in which he left my mother. And he had not told a soul that he had a family in Canada. He had divorced his first wife, but, as far as I can tell, my mother is unaware of this. They gave me his phone number and address. My half-sister told me to call him. My paternal aunt suggested that I shouldn't. In the end, I decided that I'm not difficult to track down, and if he had truly wanted to reconnect, he would have.
He didn't. My half-niece messaged me through Facebook on Saturday that he was dying. On Sunday morning, as I waited for the second message telling me he was gone (it arrived in the late afternoon), I copied pictures of him from my baby album with my digital camera, and the song that was playing in my head was not "My Father", it was my favourite Leonard Cohen tune, "Song of Bernadette", these lyrics in particular:
We've been around, we fall, we fly, We mostly fall, we mostly run. And every now and then we try To mend the damage that we've done.
Tonight, tonight, I just can't rest I've got this joy here inside my breast, To think that I did not forget That child, that song of Bernadette.
So many hearts, I find, Broke like yours and mine, Torn by what they've done and can't undo. I just want to hold you, won't you let me hold you? Like Bernadette would do.
Here's Jennifer Warnes singing it:
So may he rest; his faults lie gently on him. - William Shakespeare, Henry VIII, Act IV, Scene ii, line 31
My father always promised us that we would live in France We'd go boating on the Seine and I would learn to dance. I sail my memories afar, like boats across the Seine, And watch the Paris sunset in my father's eyes. Again. - Judy Collins
I don't know what to say other than I am grateful for brilliant poets and musicians who comfort us when we feel baffled and low. Sending you a hug of solidarity from a very snowy New York.
Oh Persephone. That's so sad, but you write it so beautifully. And I agree with Lisa on the poetry. When my father died I felt utterly bereft, but was comforted that we'd had a good relationship. I can only imagine how conflicted you must feel right now, and I'm sorry that you have to go through such a tough way of grieving. Thinking of you.xxxx
Wow! I just found your blog today, and this post made me tear up. I love how you use beauty to process the pain, each in equal measure, so that they fill one another up and make the world less empty. Thank you.
Thank you for sharing your story so eloquently. I thought you might like James Fenton's 'For Andrew Wood'
What would the dead want from us Watching from their cave? Would they have us forever howling? Would they have us rave Or disfigure ourselves, or be strangled Like some ancient emperor’s slave?
None of my dead friends were emperors With such exorbitant tastes And none of them were so vengeful As to have all their friends waste Waste quiet away in sorrow Disfigured and defaced.
I think the dead would want us To weep for what they have lost. I think that our luck in continuing Is what would affect them most. But time would find them generous And less self-engrossed.
And time would find them generous As they used to be And what else would they want from us But and honoured place in our memory, A favourite room, a hallowed chair, Privilege and celebrity? And so the dead might cease to grieve And we might make amends And there might be a pact between Dead friends and living friends. What our dead friends would want from us Would be such living friends.
This truely may sound strange to you but perhaps not. I feel as though I am a child of Hades. He is my most famous god of all. The underworld is a perfect place to live. And plus I am adopted so I have many reasons to think as though my father or mother was a god or goddess how do i know if this is true please help.
Dear Alexa, Alas, I am not a goddess myself, so I wouldn't know. My parents are all too human. If you decide to take the perilous journey of discovering the identity of your birth parents, you will probably discover the same thing.
I live in the capital city of Canada....and I'd rather not! I'm like Persephone, doomed to spend 10 months of the year in Hades and two months in my hometown. Except that Persephone got to go home for six months out of the year.
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12 comments:
I don't know what to say other than I am grateful for brilliant poets and musicians who comfort us when we feel baffled and low. Sending you a hug of solidarity from a very snowy New York.
Just knowing you looked in is enough. Bless you.
Can't begin to express what an incredible piece this is - and how beautifully written it is (yes, including the poetry from your earlier years).
Thinking of you and the ambivalence of feelings recent events must have stirred for you. Tight hugs
lisax
Oh Persephone. That's so sad, but you write it so beautifully. And I agree with Lisa on the poetry. When my father died I felt utterly bereft, but was comforted that we'd had a good relationship. I can only imagine how conflicted you must feel right now, and I'm sorry that you have to go through such a tough way of grieving. Thinking of you.xxxx
You have such a lovely way of writing, even about such a somber and emotional event. I'll be keeping you in my thoughts.
Wow! I just found your blog today, and this post made me tear up. I love how you use beauty to process the pain, each in equal measure, so that they fill one another up and make the world less empty. Thank you.
I can imagine the conflicting emotions, yet this is so beautifully moving.
Thanks for all the comments, guys. I'm feeling a bit too overwhelmed to respond to each one individually, but I appreciate them so much.
Thank you for sharing your story so eloquently. I thought you might like James Fenton's 'For Andrew Wood'
What would the dead want from us
Watching from their cave?
Would they have us forever howling?
Would they have us rave
Or disfigure ourselves, or be strangled
Like some ancient emperor’s slave?
None of my dead friends were emperors
With such exorbitant tastes
And none of them were so vengeful
As to have all their friends waste
Waste quiet away in sorrow
Disfigured and defaced.
I think the dead would want us
To weep for what they have lost.
I think that our luck in continuing
Is what would affect them most.
But time would find them generous
And less self-engrossed.
And time would find them generous
As they used to be
And what else would they want from us
But and honoured place in our memory,
A favourite room, a hallowed chair,
Privilege and celebrity?
And so the dead might cease to grieve
And we might make amends
And there might be a pact between
Dead friends and living friends.
What our dead friends would want from us
Would be such living friends.
dear, Persephone,
This truely may sound strange to you but perhaps not. I feel as though I am a child of Hades. He is my most famous god of all. The underworld is a perfect place to live. And plus I am adopted so I have many reasons to think as though my father or mother was a god or goddess how do i know if this is true please help.
Dear Alexa,
Alas, I am not a goddess myself, so I wouldn't know. My parents are all too human. If you decide to take the perilous journey of discovering the identity of your birth parents, you will probably discover the same thing.
Beautiful. Just beautiful.
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